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PostSubject: another result of boredom   March 18th 2009, 8:32 pm

contest..... bedtime story.


How Yin met Yang
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Once upon a time, long, long ago, and not so far away from here if you take a left, lived a little white cat named Yin. Yin was happy because she was all that was good. She lived up in the sky on a cloud. She played all day long.
Down on earth, in a dark forest, was a little black cat named Yang. He was sad because he was all that was bad. He loved to watch Yin and all the other cats play from his home the forest, but they were afraid of him. He wasn't really bad; it was just he was created to be everything bad.
One day Yang decided to try to play with all the other cats. When he tried to play ball with a big cat. The big cat knocked Yang over and ran away. Yang was very sad, and decided to leave. Yin called down from her cloud to him. She wasn't afraid, because bravery was a good thing. Yin said to Yang "Don't worry, I'm not afraid of you." Yang was so happy that he jumped up to the cloud where Yin lived.
They had so much fun that they decided to play every day, all day long. Then they both decided to stay together forever. When they are together, the world is perfect. When they are apart the world is troubled, for it has too much Yin, or to much Yang. Then the other cat steps up until they are equal, making the world happy once more. And if you look up at night, sometimes you can see what you think is the moon- Yin and Yang playing together forever.


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PostSubject: Re: another result of boredom   June 27th 2009, 8:13 am

Icestar wrote:
Yin said to Yang "Don't worry, I'm not afraid of you." Yang was so happy that he did jumped up to the cloud where Yin lived.

You added the word did (that he did jumped up). is that supposed to be here? I don't think so, but i could be wrong.
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PostSubject: Re: another result of boredom   June 27th 2009, 9:13 am

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PostSubject: Re: another result of boredom   July 27th 2009, 5:43 pm

Not bad

(trying to get a few more points)
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PostSubject: Re: another result of boredom   November 14th 2009, 12:26 pm

No, on second thought, I think it was good! I like happy endings!
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