Name: Treeleaf Species: Cat Gender: Male Clan: Ex-Iceclan Personality: Sly and smart. Toughened by the life of an outcast. He was outcast from Iceclan because he killed a Sunclan leader ruthlessly and without mercy. He holds grudges for a long time. His Exile angers him, although he understands it. Ferociously hates Sunstar and Sunclan. Will kill without hesitation or remorse. Sometimes poisones his claws with deathberries. Appearance: Small, black tabby with bright green eyes. Rank: Outcast
Last edited by Treethorn on November 10th 2009, 10:24 am; edited 1 time in total
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Subject: Re: Treeleaf June 10th 2009, 10:31 am
tree, you need to add WHY he was an outcast, and how he poisons his claws. Oh, and I'd like to see a little more of his personality. Other then that, it's fine.
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